I am focusing on “Is the focus of the essay narrow enough to avoid a superficial treatment?” guideline, before Friday, to revise my essay. I’m going to make sure that my essay is clear enough, and has enough detail to get my point across. I want to be able to tell my story, and be […]

When I revise any paper, I re-read what I have already written. I go over the ideas I wanted to get across, each point, and make sure that those points are clear and legible. I make sure each event I have explained is accurate, with enough detail to back it up, and all my sentences […]

This I Believe essays are a positive expression of values to a specific person. Their values, as well as beliefs, are worded in a story, or experience that a person has lived through, and how he or she has come to value their beliefs. The goals are simple. Stay positive about your beliefs and values, […]

I think that writing is important because it helps everyone to express themselves with more than just their voice. Writing is just another part of any language, and we must be able to write, as well as understand this way of communication. Writing is important because it helps everyone to understand some things that you […]